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In the void the darkness is consuming
Tethered to nothing but you can't leave
Scream my ducklings, darkness is looming
Yearn for the light, in the void grieve
All around you pulling you down
Sucking you in and letting you drown
©2008-2009 ~MoonlitMayhem
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:iconturqoisecat:
Very nice prose^_^It's very deep. Great job. I love the forth line. "Yearn for the light":wow:

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"Art, like morality, consists in drawing the line somewhere."
---Gilbert K. Chesterton

"In order to draw the line you need a ruler. If you don't use a ruler you'll go over the edge."---Me^_^
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Thank you ..... it means a lot to have someone like your work. When you have nothing it means that much more

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Immature love says "I love you because I need you",
Mature love says "I need you because I love you". - Erich Fromm
:iconturqoisecat:
No Problem^_^I completely agree...it means alot for someone to like your work=D

--
"Art, like morality, consists in drawing the line somewhere."
---Gilbert K. Chesterton

"In order to draw the line you need a ruler. If you don't use a ruler you'll go over the edge."---Me^_^

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